It’s crazy, your writing style has changed so much! Anon criticism scares me, IDK how you do it! & Til can take her sweet time, I’m relying on her to get us all through to Second Class! Wait, you &…
TENSES. Oh lawd. They used to be my kryptonite as well! Though I do sincerely doubt the fic’s as bad as you claim, here is a comfort *huggle* anyway. Be proud! IMO, writing is one of the most challenging things because it’s such a personal reflection. It comes from the soulllllll and apparently everyone’s soul is full of porn. :D
So, yeah, whatever you’re doing, it’s working!
OH HO HO. Repression, you say? Teach me the ways of the force! Those skills will prove invaluable come the (likely) Badly Named Sequel’s eventual release. Is my pessimism showing? Whoops. I’m ashamed to say that at first I didn’t “get” the First Class title and kind of assumed it was much the same as airplane seating. Yeah. Perhaps there’s a Blackbird joke to be made with that, but…
(YEAH TILLY GET OUT. GO DO THE IMPORTANT THINGS THAT ARE IMPORTANT.)
I’ve tragically only ever traveled around the perimeter of the country, and thus know absolutely nothing about Wisconsin! Correct me if I’m wrong, but I think I remember you had posted some super pretty photos of your local scenery a while back?
Annnnd since I’m a stalker and read Panda’s reply before posting this— a fellow New Yorker? Ahoy!

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